Composition 1 and 2 (Three kinds of cooks)

I read a classify essay which is about three kinds of cooks. The author considered the terrible cooks, the coping cooks, and the good cooks that he/she had experience about it with his/her aunt, sister, and cousin.

There are first composition, and second composition. After I read them, I think composition 2 is better than composition 1. The reason why I choose composition 2 because its have more specific example and good supporting detail. For instance a terrible cook of Aunt Betty, the author demonstrated that his aunt cooked sweet and sour pork which is so sweet that it reminds him of candy, and the potatoes have been cooked too long, so they taste like powder! On the other hand, in composition1 writer didn't give any example of terrible cooks, but writer just tell the feeling of terrible cooks such as "I've even decided to stay home and study because I know how terrible the food will taste" . As the result, I make a decision that composition2 is easy to read and understand.